This. Was. Amazing. I love all the build-up you put into this, the tension in their relationship here is incredible. Not to mention that you found the perfect balance between the comedy and the slashiness...
"If you don't stop doing that," Chazz said, "I'm going to stick your head in the toilet and flush it. I'm not even kidding."
I had to stop and laugh for about five minutes and catch my breath, there. Totally awesome.
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Date: 2007-05-10 04:49 pm (UTC)"If you don't stop doing that," Chazz said, "I'm going to stick your head in the toilet and flush it. I'm not even kidding."
I had to stop and laugh for about five minutes and catch my breath, there. Totally awesome.