This is pretty much the best thing I've read in this fandom. Oh my god. Oh my god. I never wanted it to end. Please, please tell me you're going to write that third part.
I noticed one teeny little typo: "It felt different than the last kisses, the one's that Jimmy remembered" has that extra apostrophe.
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Date: 2007-05-10 08:02 pm (UTC)I noticed one teeny little typo: "It felt different than the last kisses, the one's that Jimmy remembered" has that extra apostrophe.