I really loved you giving Chazz perspective in this chapter. This chap really suites him. And you really gave the reader a perspective of the roller coaster Jimmy oh so accurately described (or you, rather). Awesome Sauce! Really, it rocked. And I'm DAMN glad there's more adult stuff in this chapter. It was Chazz's perspective after all.
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Date: 2007-05-25 07:15 pm (UTC)