I admit, when I started to read this, I was wondering if this was going to take the "let's pretend we are a couple to amuse ourselves!" thing and end with declarations of love and whatnot. Which wouldn't be a bad thing, at all, but I really like how you made it not about that, but so totally about them.
This was my favorite line:
“You woo people with time and space,” Donna said, her voice a little quieter now. “And then you are surprised when it works and they fall in love with you.”
That part he could agree with.
“But not Donna Noble,” he said, filling in the blank.
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Date: 2008-06-28 04:44 am (UTC)This was my favorite line:
“You woo people with time and space,” Donna said, her voice a little quieter now. “And then you are surprised when it works and they fall in love with you.”
That part he could agree with.
“But not Donna Noble,” he said, filling in the blank.
Excellent!