ohhh, this was beautiful. i love the way you write the dynamic of the tribe, the interactions between various pairings and groupings of them, and the longing that each of them feels for something/someone. other than that random moment in "going down" where jeannie's like, poking crissy with an imaginary dildo or something, i never really thought of the two of them as a pairing, but you completely convinced me with this story!
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Date: 2009-08-10 04:37 am (UTC)